tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post7193545497692629024..comments2023-08-28T23:00:52.674+08:00Comments on 6-8 2011: Composition by Devesh (unedited) - The Fallen Treevaleriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00046272576888706398noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-3046960395867313412011-08-14T16:19:44.831+08:002011-08-14T16:19:44.831+08:00It was a good compo, there are a lot of good vocab...It was a good compo, there are a lot of good vocab and no died wood.I wish that i could write such good compo.<br />*Loo Jia Lin*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-26315997907573362252011-08-13T14:35:22.164+08:002011-08-13T14:35:22.164+08:00Good vocab! It really caught my attention.
Gregory...Good vocab! It really caught my attention.<br />GregoryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-3763331323297702312011-08-12T21:23:23.165+08:002011-08-12T21:23:23.165+08:00Gd vocab and grammar! I was totally captured by yo...Gd vocab and grammar! I was totally captured by your story<br />Khoo Xin huiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-39790195905471186282011-08-12T20:06:01.800+08:002011-08-12T20:06:01.800+08:00Oops. Thanks Devesh!
MaisarahOops. Thanks Devesh!<br /><br />MaisarahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-81528592426206397592011-08-12T18:34:14.048+08:002011-08-12T18:34:14.048+08:00@Maisarah @Matthias - Both of you have spelt it wr...@Maisarah @Matthias - Both of you have spelt it wrongly! It's "int<b>e</b>rest".Deveshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08590162579468161748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-82330689608812473322011-08-12T09:39:19.465+08:002011-08-12T09:39:19.465+08:00This compo has quite a lot of describing words for...This compo has quite a lot of describing words for us to use.we should learn from this compo.berwyn(刘宗训)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00627328930116106353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-14703107564327451642011-08-11T22:29:30.848+08:002011-08-11T22:29:30.848+08:00Devesh's compo has lots of nice sentences to l...Devesh's compo has lots of nice sentences to learn from. I hope that i can write like them and have my compo postedMariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04444339256807244228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-80247799873778847832011-08-11T21:36:20.855+08:002011-08-11T21:36:20.855+08:00Lovely compo, obviously alot of effort has been pu...Lovely compo, obviously alot of effort has been put in. Thumbs UpMarcushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05576591706786507445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-76996581056441390132011-08-11T20:27:42.120+08:002011-08-11T20:27:42.120+08:00Devesh, great effort put in and has excellent desc...Devesh, great effort put in and has excellent description on details.<br />Ng Wen QiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-3611429703835731072011-08-11T20:16:55.671+08:002011-08-11T20:16:55.671+08:00Maisarah,i think u spelled "intrested" w...Maisarah,i think u spelled "intrested" wrongly<br />Matthias.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-54151689833309155822011-08-11T20:15:41.430+08:002011-08-11T20:15:41.430+08:00This compo Describes everything in detail.Simple b...This compo Describes everything in detail.Simple but grips the attention of the reader.Has very good adjetives to describe the details.THUMBS UP!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-24107734857756834862011-08-11T20:13:12.440+08:002011-08-11T20:13:12.440+08:00Marvelous compo. Very intresting, especially the l...Marvelous compo. Very intresting, especially the last paragraph second sentence.<br /><br />MaisarahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-49629526936646029882011-08-11T18:25:16.105+08:002011-08-11T18:25:16.105+08:00Exellent starting and with the brackets, Devesh is...Exellent starting and with the brackets, Devesh is a whiz! Humor is a good way of breaking the troubles in. Good job adding in the details from reality.<br /><br />IvanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-17187438061385215482011-08-11T18:17:53.378+08:002011-08-11T18:17:53.378+08:00I feel that this is to a good compo and I have a l...I feel that this is to a good compo and I have a lot to learn from it. This is a really creative peice of work and I hope I will be able to right lile this one day. Jonathan YeoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5212539934133003492.post-1234846133132052672011-08-11T15:53:28.870+08:002011-08-11T15:53:28.870+08:00Dammit, I just realised that I had put "truck...Dammit, I just realised that I had put "trucks" and "lorries" in the same sentence!<br /><br />Quote:<br />The rain showed no signs of abating, and the busy road was now filled with cars, <b>trucks, and even a few lorries.</b>Deveshnoreply@blogger.com