Wednesday, August 3, 2011

LRD - That First Sniff can kill (16 bubbls)

Look at these bubbls created by you and your friends based on the article That First Sniff can kill.

Whose bubbl do you like best? Why? (It captures the content of the article on That First Sniff can kill most accurately and comprehensively? It is well-organised and easy to understand? The creator has put in effort to proof read his/her work?...)

Leave your comments.

Leona's bubbl

Shimin's bubbl

Marianne's bubbl

Gregory's bubbl



Qian Ling's bubbl

Matthias' bubbl

Ada's bubbl

Devesh's bubbl

Xin Hui's bubbl

Jonathan's bubbl

Kian Yang's bubbl

Cai Leng's bubbl

Jin Kang's bubbl

Maisarah's bubbl

Jacques' bubbl

Wen Xuan's bubbl

36 comments:

  1. Though all of the bubbls are quite well done, my particularly personal favourite would be Maisarah's. I think Maisarah's bubbl is very well paragraphed and contains all important information from the article.

    Bhairavi Buddhamurthy

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  2. I think that Jonathan's bubbl is the best as it is well-organised. It also states many effects on glue sniffing.(The colours are nice too!)

    By Gregory

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  3. mdm toh you posted the wrong bubble.
    xin hui

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  4. I think that Maisarah's bubble is very organised, detailed and well written.
    Her bubble had also captured more or less the important points that was in the article. However, EVERYONE's work were also very detailed.
    Xin Hui

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  5. I think that Jacques's bubbles is very detailed in stating the negative effects of glue sniffing and it is easy to understand too.

    Wen Xuan~

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  6. I think Jacques has put in a lot of effort in doing his work.

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  7. I think that Wen Xuan's bubbles is very clear as it contained lot of direct and short information.

    Kian Yang

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  8. The bubbl that I like the most is Jonathan's bubbl because it is very easy to read/ not cramped and it captures the main points of the article.

    But Gregory's bubbl is not to bad (the colours are quite nice, except the pink bubbl!).

    Everyone's work was also nice, so the two above are just exceptions.

    Maisarah Abdul Latiff

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  9. To me, all the bubbls are great. However I like Maisarah's bubbl the best as it is very well organised and contains important information from the article.
    Cai Leng

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  10. In terms of clarity, I would say Maisarah's bubble. However, if you will forgive me for parroting the views of others, all 13 did a good job in doing their work (excluding me, my mind map is very small).

    However, two things:

    1. Where is the image for Shi Min's mind map. Flash lags when I try to click on the link. (thus rendering me unable to view the map in the first place)

    2. You posted the wrong bubbl for Xin Hui. (Airbus article instead of current one)

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  11. All the bubbles were dona with effort, i like maisarah's the most though. hers was organized and was very accurate on the information

    ada

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  12. sorry type wrong is done not dona
    ada

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  13. DEVESH!!! THE BEST!!! DEVESH!!! THE BEST!!! IT IS WELL-ORGANISED!!!

    RAINER

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  14. Sorry about the wrong bubbl, Xin Hui. I could not upload shimin's bubbl... click on the link to view hers.

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  15. To all who read this, there will be a mini test tomorrow on this!

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  16. I think Johnathan's is the best as it was the most well-organised,however,Shi Min and Mariannne's are short,consise and straight to the point and I think that is okay as well. Nevertheless,there are some which are too messy too.

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  17. I think that Devesh's bubbl is well coordinated and is quite simple actually . Although it is is quite simple , it is good in the content and gives me an idea of glue sniffing
    Jacques

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  18. I like Maisarah's bubbl as it tells me all the effects, causes and facts of glue sniffing. Other than Maisarah's, I think that I Ada,Leona, Shimin, Gregory, Matthias, Xin Hui, Jonathan, Jin Kang, Jacques and Wen Xuan's bubbl are quite well done, their facts are straight and consise

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  19. I think that for this round, many of the bubbs have been quite okay as they captures all the main points and the focus too.
    But, in overall, I like Maisarah because her bubb is very well-orgainsed and very specific.
    Peh Qian Ling

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  20. I feel that Matthias's bubbl is the best as it gives examples and puts them in a format where every detail can be seen at a glance. It is also quite neat so i could look for the information i need at a glance.

    Ivan

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  21. I fell that Gregory's mind-map is good because it is really in-depth and really easy to understand.
    Jonathan Yeo.

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  22. I feel that Wen Xuan's bubbl is very clear and easy to understand.

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  23. I feel that Gregory's bubbl is the best(although i must say that there is quite a fair lot of typo mistakes).Neverless,I still feel that Gregory's bubbl is not only very well-formated,but also bite-sized for me to read.It is also very well-detailed,thus giving me a very clear explanation on the subject.
    Matthias

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  24. I think that Maisarah mindmap is one of the better ones. Not even it is the most detailed but is is the biggerst mindmap among the sixtheen but I did not say that she is the best as there are stii more information thats she lacks but overalls is still fine. As for the rest, It is still quite well organised even though it is still not the best of all.

    Brian Tang

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  25. I think that Maisarah mindmap is one of the better ones. Not even it is the most detailed but is is the biggerst mindmap among the sixtheen but I did not say that she is the best as there are stii more information thats she lacks but overalls is still fine. As for the rest, It is still quite well organised even though it is still not the best of all.

    Brian Tang

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  26. I like Maisarah's bubbl the most as it is well-organized and clear. It also captures all the important points of the article. Her bubbl also shows the causes, effects and harms of glue sniffing.

    Celine

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  27. I like Devesh's bubble as it is well organised, simple to understand and gives me a clear image on the harmful effects by sniffing inhalants.

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  28. I like Ada's bubbl because it is simple, neat and easy to understand the informations.

    Valencia Tan

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  29. I think that I like maisarah's bubbl the most as it was very organized and many details were given. I thinks Leona's bubbl was very well filled with information but it was not organised well enough.
    Na Zhen

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  30. i think that the one that i like among them is maisarah's one as it have enough imformation of the acticle and without looking at the passage, i will know what is it about.

    Loo Jia Lin

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  31. Among all the bubbles,I like Maisarah's bubble as it is organised properly and has sufficient information in the bubble.

    JiaYun

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  32. I think that Devesh's is the best because it is very detailed



    Ben

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  33. Si En

    I think Wen Xuan's is the best because of the vast information given.

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  34. I like Maisarah's bubbl as it tells me all the effects, causes and facts of glue sniffing. Other than Maisarah's, I think that Ada's bubbl is simple,Leona and shi min aren't that bad either,Gregory's bubbl is not only very well-formated,but also bite-sized for me to read.It is also very well-detailed, Matthias's bubbl is the best as it gives examples and puts them in a format where every detail, Xin Hui, Jonathan, Jin Kang, Jacques and Wen Xuan's bubbl are quite well done too, their facts are straight and concise.Devesh's is no bad because it is very detailed.

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  35. I like Maisarah's and Caileng's bubbl as caileng's bubbl is straightforward while Maisarah's bubbl if fully detailed.

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  36. my favorite bubbl is Wen Xuan's one. it is accurate.it is also easy to be understood and is well organized.

    Henny Maherah

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